Dilvish, the Damned: more “not Tolkien”

One of the things I enjoy most about old Appendix N work (and similarly classic and formational SFF) is that there’s so much “not Tolkien” fantasy to masticate. Don’t get me wrong – I love me some JRR hobbits and trolls, but I’ve gotten kind of worn out on today’s brand of knock-off Gandalfs and Legolas clones. Even when they’re Dark-Legolas.


So how about an Elfin hero who’s not so Elfy?

He’s got the green Elf-boots (TM) that assure he always magically lands on his feet, and seem to give him a vague sneaking bonus of some kind, but he doesn’t tote a longbow, thank God. Nor does he dual-wield any kind of fighting implements – no, he seems plenty comfortable with plain, old cold steel.

He doesn’t hear the whispers of the trees, nor does he charm animals, unless you count his companion/mount Black, the metal demon horse. And he doesn’t know any spells of protection or healing, but he does know a few incantations in the tongue of the underworld that can level cities.


Dilvish, the Damned is an interesting sort of protagonist, consorting with or banishing demons as called for in a given situation. Driven by a deep thirst for revenge against the Saruman-type who banished him to Hell, he still holds to his own strict moral code, which includes assisting the weak and needy when able, and killing only those who deserve it when it can’t be avoided. In the introductory stories, we see him racing, out of a sense of personal obligation, to save a city from conquest. Later on he helps various other unfortunates who just happen to be in his path. He doles out both death and mercy. Dilvish is no saint, but he’s clearly no villain, either.

My favorite parts of Dilvish, the Damned were the stories of gods and fantastical creatures with somewhat less-than-common spin. One story is about a meeting with a werewolf, whom Dilvish pities and would rather not slay. Now there are a lot of popular associations when it comes to werewolves – weakness to silver, the full moon, transformation. But all this story really focuses on is the unrelenting hunger of the beast. It struck me in a positive way.

Another tale includes the recounting of a deicide committed by an ancestor of Dilvish. Excellent dying words here:


I’ve become a big fan of short stories, and the episodic, yet continuing nature of Dilvish’s adventures scratches an itch. Although I really wish I knew what happened to that sweet invisible sword he picks up in one story and seems to lose sometime before the next. But alas, leaving some things unsaid or unexplained can be an effective storytelling technique.

The most disappointing part of the Dilvish stories has been Zelazny’s uneven writing, which is perhaps unsurprising for story written over the span of decades. Sometimes the writing is quite good and characters use archaic yet unstilted manners of speech (see above).

At other times the writing slips into a more…contemporary flavor.


This can be all the more jarring when the two writing/speaking styles intermingle in the same story. If you can get past this, however, the writing is pretty solid, even if not every story is a home run.

Dilvish, the Damned was a pleasant surprise for me. I enjoyed Zelazny’s Amber stories, but for whatever reason I was expecting a “hero” somewhere between Cugel and Elric. While Dilvish certainly falls short of the traditional Christian champion of yore, we do instead have a flawed but noble hero to cheer for.

He is named both “Damned” and “Deliverer” by characters in his world, and he indeed presents us with another (though lighter) shade of gray. But Zelazny still delivers us a hero, free of grimdark nihilism, and with enough uniqueness for me to recommend picking this one up if you get the chance. 4.5/5.



19 thoughts on “Dilvish, the Damned: more “not Tolkien”

  1. The front cover of the book I owned featured what was apparently Dennis DeYoung wearing green boots that went up above mid-thigh.
    I have been unable to erase that image from my mind.

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    1. I look forward to reading your reaction. I don’t want to overhype it, but Dying Earth was almost mind-blowing for me. I love me some Vance, if you couldn’t tell.


    1. I’d say so. I may have liked Amber better, but this was a good (and much quicker) read. I know you’ve got a lot on your plate right now, but I will look for your thoughts on Dilvish when you get a chance!

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  2. That’s a good description of Dilvish, one of my favorite Zelazny characters. I second your recommendation of this collection; it is a good, fast read and the short story format lets you go at your own pace. The first few Dilvish stories probably count as early Zelazny, and give you a look at how his writing changed over time.

    If you have a taste for Zelazny, may I recommend This Immortal? It tied with Dune for the Hugo Award in 1966.

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  3. Thanks, John. I’ll add it to my list. I have a few other of his books waiting in the wing – Creatures of Light and Darkness, Lord of Light, and A Night in the Lonesome October. Any thoughts on those?


    1. Let’s see:

      Creatures of Light and Darkness: a strange one, not one of my favorites but your taste may differ. Contains prose, poetry and the last chapter is the script for a play. Has Characters that may or may not be deities out of Earth’s myths.

      Lord of Light – very good, won the Hugo, nominated for the Nebula award. Deliberately written by Zelazny so that you could read it as SF or Fantasy, it is about human spacefarers that colonize a planet but the surviving crew members set themselves as gods modeled on the Hindu pantheon. One of Zelazny’s best and I highly recommend it.

      A Night in the Lonesome October – his last book, and I cannot make a recommendation because I have not finished it. A family member booknapped it when I was still on the first chapter and I have lost track of it since.
      Contains many characters from horror and mystery fiction as well as history, with a dash of Lovecraft’s Cthulhu Mythos.

      I’m interested in hearing your reaction to these, PCBushi. Take your time, though. You have so much to read, there isn’t any rush.


  4. I respect more than like the early stories, but the later batch, starting with “The White Beast,” on the other hand, I really liked. The quote I used at the head of my Black Gate review is one of my favorite from any S&S story.

    “Have you given any thought to what you are going to do if — rather, when — you make it to the top?”

    “Look for trouble,” Dilvish said. “Defend myself at all times. Strike instantly if I see the enemy.”

    Black and Dilvish to each other in “Tower of Ice”

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    1. Heh, I actually think I preferred the early and a couple of the mid stories! But “The White Beast” was one of my favorites for sure. Some great quotes in Dilvish.


  5. I’ve also started reading my way through Appendix N. So many good stories that are sadly neglected today. Robert E. Howard has made me a fan of Sword and Sorcery and Poul Anderson has rejuvenated my love for Fantasy(which had previously died out thanks to Game of Thrones and its many knock-offs). Jack Vance is the next author I’m going to read, starting with the Dying Earth.

    I’ve never read anything by Zelazny, however. This story sounds like a good starting place. Nice review.

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